01-10-2012, 08:40 AM
Todd, thank you, I've got loads of changes to make now and am very happy 
Your reading of the first stanza reminded me of exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this -- it was a little while ago now but you're so completely right about that!
Will post the revision forthwith, many thanks.

Your reading of the first stanza reminded me of exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this -- it was a little while ago now but you're so completely right about that!
Will post the revision forthwith, many thanks.
It could be worse
