Dark Obsession
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I have been working on this one for a while because I was never able to get the feeling I wanted into it. I did a (nearly) complete rewrite. (I edited the OP, but because of pagination I'm posting it here also for easy access):

Daughter of lust claim me.
I expire in you
and breathe in your cloud
of jet black pain

Pressing me down into a hole,
shovel in hand--
I dig you
down.

Not drowning, worshiping the water I inhale . . .
I inhale you
and exhale all of me,
but still you leave me
weaker than before.
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Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 09-05-2011, 01:24 AM
RE: Dark Obesession - by billy - 09-05-2011, 05:53 AM
RE: Dark Obesession - by heslopian - 09-05-2011, 05:57 AM
RE: Dark Obesession - by Todd - 09-05-2011, 07:03 AM
RE: Dark Obesession - by Leanne - 09-05-2011, 08:43 AM
RE: Dark Obesession - by Wildcard - 09-05-2011, 10:54 PM
RE: Dark Obesession - by billy - 09-06-2011, 08:29 AM
RE: Dark Obesession - by Leanne - 09-06-2011, 05:07 AM
2nd Try - by Wildcard - 09-06-2011, 07:04 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by billy - 09-06-2011, 08:45 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Todd - 09-06-2011, 08:59 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 09-06-2011, 09:03 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by billy - 09-06-2011, 09:07 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 09-06-2011, 09:18 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Erthona - 01-13-2012, 05:08 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by ckeo - 09-09-2011, 11:22 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 09-09-2011, 01:23 PM
RE: Dark Obsession - by billy - 09-09-2011, 03:17 PM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 01-06-2012, 07:08 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 01-13-2012, 08:38 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Philatone - 01-13-2012, 09:46 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Erthona - 01-13-2012, 10:31 AM
RE: Dark Obsession - by Wildcard - 01-13-2012, 12:15 PM



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