01-02-2012, 11:21 PM
I'm talking more about content. I take each line independently before looking at them as joint units. If I'd simply posted the first line I'd have gotten no interest.
She was old and feeble
To me that is a static weak line, again I see that as a largely subjective argument. Different writers have different hot buttons when they create something.
She was old and feeble
To me that is a static weak line, again I see that as a largely subjective argument. Different writers have different hot buttons when they create something.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson