Jim Eye Knee
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Erthona, are you my knight in rusting armour...at best I am your knight in crusty armor! Steel undies chaff!

No, you can take care of yourself. I figure how many minute minuet per minute is your business.

(the combination of dyslexia and minute font in combination with fading eyesight strikes again. Although that is one I usually double check because it is a mistake I am so apt to make. But you keep at it, I have needed a good proofreader for a long time. I'll start sending you material for my next book. Smile

No, I just got the idea of the sound of crunching crickets in my mind and needed a vehicle with good tires to run them over. Wait, sorry, mixed metaphor.

...and needed a poem idea that included crickets getting crunched. It seemed an apt image to have big granny boots coming down to crunch a cricket. Oooooh I like that "crunch a cricket".
It was all just fodder for a farce! Only puny punny harm intended (metaphorically speaking). Smile

Dale

Disclaimer: No actual crickets were harmed in the making of this poem!
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Messages In This Thread
Jim Eye Knee - by Erthona - 12-31-2011, 07:24 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by grannyjill - 12-31-2011, 07:42 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by Erthona - 01-01-2012, 06:13 AM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by grannyjill - 01-01-2012, 07:25 AM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by Erthona - 01-01-2012, 09:55 AM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by popeye - 01-01-2012, 03:14 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by Erthona - 01-01-2012, 03:27 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by popeye - 01-01-2012, 03:43 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by Erthona - 01-01-2012, 04:05 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by popeye - 01-04-2012, 06:00 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by Erthona - 01-04-2012, 08:46 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by popeye - 01-05-2012, 05:31 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by Wildcard - 01-05-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: Jim Eye Knee - by Erthona - 01-06-2012, 10:46 AM



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