Away from you

[Wildcard]

Hi there,
Haven't seen you around in a while. It's good to see you posting.

Try and leave some feedback for the other poets when you can.

Blown away --it's not the strongest opening (no offense) but I definitely like the image the first section gives of being stranded and unable to feel anchored alone
Sway in the wind
Don't leave me
Unembraced

Darlin' come with me --to me the use of "darlin'" contrasts with the language of "'tis". I could be wrong though
Let the voices scream
'Till this endless flow
Shouts in silence

I heard them calling --the tense seems mixed up. If you use 'heard'(past tense) then I think you should replace "can't" with "couldn't"
Those rude heartless
But they can't hold me
Away from you, my love

I'm sorry to just --I think I get what you're trying to do with the repetition here, but IMO it doesn't work
To just, not adjust
To ignore these
Ruthless thoughts

There is a lot of emotion here and I think with some edits you will be able to shape this into something great. Thanks for sharing.