12-29-2011, 06:38 AM
(12-26-2011, 02:36 AM)Mark Wrote: This is a jewel, Aish. I am very fond of every word here, but I think me and Google need to talk about 'transmutation' before I reply further.I'm back, but I still don't fully understand. I think it's something intangible that you are getting at, but I just can't seem to find it. I guess I'll just keep coming back to this until I find a way.
Thanks for sharing and I'll definitely be back.
I can say that I keep coming back for a reason. It's not just because I want to give crit either. Something in this poem makes me want to get the meaning out of it and that is definitely a good thing. So like Arnie said, "I'll be back"

