12-29-2011, 04:50 AM
"damn...I've just realised that this is in 'Serious' crit and I've been told not to write verses in my responses...but, my excuse? You started it"
Well you know us old people, we like to chat and our minds do wonder. As this is an old thread, hopefully they'll just ignore it. But I was told not to quote a full poem you wrote, I don't think on the spot verse form counts. Well hold serve, I will have to get a ruling on that. UMPIRE!!!!!
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Freudian?
Yes, that would be a term for a simple soul. Here is how a simple soul responds to that word.
Girl in a bar talking with "simple soul man"
She "Was that a Freudian slip?"
He "Floyd who?"
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BTW
Some of the synonyms for simple are: artless, common, ignorant, elementary, facile, incomplex, unexperienced, unpretentious, unschooled, unsophisticated, unstudied, unvarnished...
We've wandered off it appears, soon they'll be handing us our rears, we should get back to the thread, screw it, I've got nothing, that horse is dead.
Dale
Well you know us old people, we like to chat and our minds do wonder. As this is an old thread, hopefully they'll just ignore it. But I was told not to quote a full poem you wrote, I don't think on the spot verse form counts. Well hold serve, I will have to get a ruling on that. UMPIRE!!!!!
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Freudian?
Yes, that would be a term for a simple soul. Here is how a simple soul responds to that word.
Girl in a bar talking with "simple soul man"
She "Was that a Freudian slip?"
He "Floyd who?"
---------
BTW
Some of the synonyms for simple are: artless, common, ignorant, elementary, facile, incomplex, unexperienced, unpretentious, unschooled, unsophisticated, unstudied, unvarnished...
We've wandered off it appears, soon they'll be handing us our rears, we should get back to the thread, screw it, I've got nothing, that horse is dead.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.