12-29-2011, 03:46 AM
Only one comment -
I keep reading this bit
"fully ripe, darling
just like you
out of touch"
as
"fully ripe, darling
just like you
out of reach"
no one else has mentioned it, so maybe it is just me...do you actually mean that the mango isn't up to date with the latest trends? The latter makes more sense for me, even though the mango is there at your feet!
I keep reading this bit
"fully ripe, darling
just like you
out of touch"
as
"fully ripe, darling
just like you
out of reach"
no one else has mentioned it, so maybe it is just me...do you actually mean that the mango isn't up to date with the latest trends? The latter makes more sense for me, even though the mango is there at your feet!