Excavation Point

[grannyjill]

I reckon Aish is right about 'the

biting into terra firma,
tasting frozen roots and tubers
with galvanized teeth
this place
is the last place
no other memory makes sense anymore

.....you know the more I read this opening the more I like it....the sounds are so satisfying...never mind the meaning. The 't' alliteration I have already mentioned, but there is also the 'sssss' sound from galvanized/this/place/last/place/makes/sense....I think much of my enjoyment of poetry is based on such things.