Excavation Point
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Thanks for your time, Aish. I left out all punctuation purposely, but I was kind of crossing my fingers to see if anyone would think it was wrong. Todd once spoke of jumping in with both feet being the better way to learn so that's what I did. Can you give me ideas for which punctuation you mean?

As to the multiple instances of 'the', I think that makes sense. I will look at it more.

To Jill:
I'm beginning to see what you meant in your comments the more I re-read this. Thanks again for taking time to give your advice.
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Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 12-27-2011, 05:26 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by grannyjill - 12-27-2011, 07:05 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 12-27-2011, 07:32 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by grannyjill - 12-27-2011, 07:45 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 12-27-2011, 08:25 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by grannyjill - 12-27-2011, 04:17 PM
RE: Excavation Point - by Aish - 12-28-2011, 05:33 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 12-28-2011, 08:11 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by grannyjill - 12-28-2011, 05:46 PM
RE: Excavation Point - by Philatone - 12-29-2011, 05:34 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 12-29-2011, 06:18 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Philatone - 12-29-2011, 07:00 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by popeye - 12-29-2011, 12:54 PM
RE: Excavation Point - by grannyjill - 12-29-2011, 05:25 PM
RE: Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 12-30-2011, 06:45 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Aish - 12-30-2011, 10:00 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Todd - 12-30-2011, 11:04 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 12-30-2011, 11:45 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Todd - 12-30-2011, 11:59 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 12-31-2011, 01:03 PM
RE: Excavation Point - by grannyjill - 12-31-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: Excavation Point - by Erthona - 12-31-2011, 06:46 PM
RE: Excavation Point - by Wildcard - 01-01-2012, 12:11 AM
RE: Excavation Point - by Todd - 01-01-2012, 01:45 AM



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