12-27-2011, 01:51 PM
I think your meaning comes through very clearly actually, that's pretty much the same as what I got from the poem. Well, with the exception of knowing that the orchard is on their own block... not quite sure how to make that detail clearer as yet, or even if you need to.
Bouquet's will work very nicely
Bouquet's will work very nicely
It could be worse
