Excavation Point

[Wildcard]

You're right - I've done a couple more readings and the 'place' refrain does work....it was the last verse which made me doubt that, but on reflection no change would be the best option.

Mr. Webster told me tubers were roots and roots were tubers...but, it's not worth fighting over, especially as it is your poem, and the 't' alliteration works so well.
bye, grannyjill

I re-read my post and I hope that I don't sound stubborn Maybe I am being stubborn . . . Let me kick back to this one in a few days and I might be 'eating crow' I appreciate you caring enough to try to help me and I don't want to sound like somebody who thinks they've got it all figured out- I know I have a lot to learn.