Excavation Point

[grannyjill]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tuber

Tubers are not roots, GJ. And the excavation is more important than the filling back in. As far as 'place' repeating . . . I'll look at it, but in all honesty I consider it to be the connecting refrain although it changes a little each time. I'll definitely see if there is more I could do with it.

Thanks for reading and the advice.

You're right - I've done a couple more readings and the 'place' refrain does work....it was the last verse which made me doubt that, but on reflection no change would be the best option.

Mr. Webster told me tubers were roots and roots were tubers...but, it's not worth fighting over, especially as it is your poem, and the 't' alliteration works so well.
bye, grannyjill