Black Country Cruise
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This is a very, very old poem which hasn't seen the light of day for years! I am trying to show you a scene through my eyes.

Through bulrushes and tangled reeds,
a narrow boat thrusts its way
over badly-spoken bikes,
drowned prams and lost boots,
whilst sticklebacks dart under her beam.

Undulating eddies annoy
the bank-bound fishermen
as they idle in the collapsed afternoon,
casting covetous glances
at her back
as she steams nonchalantly by.

Her tow-path meanders in tandem
with the somnolent canal,
where hedgerows cramp its freedom
as it cuts through freshly harvested fields.

Succulent, dust-free blackberries
decorate each bramble hedge
like purple dew-drop clusters
awaiting children’s lips

as dragon-flies show-off their shot-silk
shirts to the dowdy horse-fly swarms
who in turn tease
the long-lashed cows,
browsing in the afternoon’s warmth.
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Black Country Cruise - by grannyjill - 12-26-2011, 06:50 PM
RE: Black Country Cruise - by rayheinrich - 12-26-2011, 09:38 PM
RE: Black Country Cruise - by Erthona - 12-26-2011, 10:29 PM



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