Coiled
#9
Aish, I'm on the fly here as I'm cooking breakfast, but I'll definitely come back as soon as I can. My immediate suggestion to get rid of spiders, though, is this:

Quote:In the twilight of a sibilant heart
spinning mouths
embroider a silken embrace

silken implies slipping softly, whereas silk alone is almost always taken as a symbol for spiders (in cliche land at least!)

Really, I'll come back.
It could be worse
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Messages In This Thread
Coiled - by Aish - 12-18-2011, 07:19 PM
RE: Coiled - by billy - 12-18-2011, 08:41 PM
RE: Coiled - by Erthona - 12-19-2011, 12:57 AM
RE: Coiled - by grannyjill - 12-19-2011, 07:12 AM
RE: Coiled - by Wildcard - 12-19-2011, 07:46 AM
RE: Coiled - by Philatone - 12-19-2011, 09:24 AM
RE: Coiled - by Todd - 12-20-2011, 05:04 AM
RE: Coiled - by Aish - 12-21-2011, 08:22 PM
RE: Coiled - by Leanne - 12-22-2011, 06:18 AM
RE: Coiled - by Aish - 12-22-2011, 06:28 AM
RE: Coiled - by Leanne - 12-22-2011, 08:14 AM



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