12-21-2011, 09:13 PM
Ditto LA and Ed.
Really liked "live like an emblem"
It's a poem, it's just lined out like prose.
Re: "Who died and made you God?" A bit cliche.
Maybe something like.
"Did you kill God and crown yourself, or did someone elect you?"
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When I was young I was so bright my mother called me sun.
However she died and I have become less bright.
Dale
Really liked "live like an emblem"
It's a poem, it's just lined out like prose.
Re: "Who died and made you God?" A bit cliche.
Maybe something like.
"Did you kill God and crown yourself, or did someone elect you?"
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When I was young I was so bright my mother called me sun.
However she died and I have become less bright.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.