12-21-2011, 09:48 AM
Leanne,
Thanks for reading and for the kind words. I'll take a look at the first part again.
Abu nuwas,
Your comments make me so happy. Being insecure about this one, your evaluation(and Leanne's) makes me feel better about this.
To both of you(and anyone else who knows): What is this piece of writing? What category does it fall in? I haven't a clue. It's just what I felt.
what do you mean?
Thanks for reading and for the kind words. I'll take a look at the first part again.
Abu nuwas,
Your comments make me so happy. Being insecure about this one, your evaluation(and Leanne's) makes me feel better about this.
To both of you(and anyone else who knows): What is this piece of writing? What category does it fall in? I haven't a clue. It's just what I felt.
(12-21-2011, 07:01 AM)abu nuwas Wrote: I thought the sun was a good metaphor for the sun..I keep re-reading this
what do you mean?