12-21-2011, 08:52 AM
todd
you raise the same points of contentions I had. I thought about removing the first stanza after finishing, but wanted to see other thoughts. glad to have confirmation on it.
also agreed on "tools" being too vague as I was writing; with the deletion of the first stanza, it certainly becomes much more possible to use "chisel", and more appropriate I feel. finally, agree on a number of your word and line shifts. thanks for helping to solidify this for me.
you raise the same points of contentions I had. I thought about removing the first stanza after finishing, but wanted to see other thoughts. glad to have confirmation on it.
also agreed on "tools" being too vague as I was writing; with the deletion of the first stanza, it certainly becomes much more possible to use "chisel", and more appropriate I feel. finally, agree on a number of your word and line shifts. thanks for helping to solidify this for me.
Written only for you to consider.