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High Above Me
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12-21-2011, 07:01 AM
Truly original. I thought the sun was a good metaphor for the sun....and I liked 'Who died and made you God?' -- though without it, it would also be good, but slightly different. Because of its originality, to make suggestions would, I think, be a little like the blokes sitting round the first potter, suggesting he maybe throw in an apple or two....
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High Above Me - by Wildcard - 12-21-2011, 01:36 AM
RE: High Above Me - by Leanne - 12-21-2011, 04:43 AM
RE: High Above Me - by abu nuwas - 12-21-2011, 07:01 AM
RE: High Above Me - by Wildcard - 12-21-2011, 09:48 AM
RE: High Above Me - by Leanne - 12-21-2011, 01:32 PM
RE: High Above Me - by Wildcard - 12-21-2011, 01:35 PM
RE: High Above Me - by Erthona - 12-21-2011, 09:13 PM
RE: High Above Me - by Wildcard - 12-21-2011, 11:27 PM
RE: High Above Me - by grannyjill - 12-23-2011, 02:36 AM
RE: High Above Me - by Wildcard - 12-23-2011, 03:41 AM
RE: High Above Me - by grannyjill - 12-23-2011, 08:54 AM
RE: High Above Me - by Wildcard - 12-23-2011, 09:08 AM
RE: High Above Me - by Erthona - 12-24-2011, 06:26 AM
RE: High Above Me - by Wildcard - 12-24-2011, 06:54 AM
RE: High Above Me - by Wildcard - 02-22-2012, 02:19 PM
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