Coiled
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I lost the thread (no pun intended) of this after 'embraces' - I saw the opening as the act of spiders cocooning their victims...but, the remainder sounds good but has no meaning that I can see.

But, I always struggle with esoteric poetry - well, actually, I don't struggle because I tend to give up and just go with the flow in verses such as this.
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Coiled - by Aish - 12-18-2011, 07:19 PM
RE: Coiled - by billy - 12-18-2011, 08:41 PM
RE: Coiled - by Erthona - 12-19-2011, 12:57 AM
RE: Coiled - by grannyjill - 12-19-2011, 07:12 AM
RE: Coiled - by Wildcard - 12-19-2011, 07:46 AM
RE: Coiled - by Philatone - 12-19-2011, 09:24 AM
RE: Coiled - by Todd - 12-20-2011, 05:04 AM
RE: Coiled - by Aish - 12-21-2011, 08:22 PM
RE: Coiled - by Leanne - 12-22-2011, 06:18 AM
RE: Coiled - by Aish - 12-22-2011, 06:28 AM
RE: Coiled - by Leanne - 12-22-2011, 08:14 AM



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