Coiled

[billy]

i think sibilant a great word, i used to think it had something to do with brother or sister hehe. it does go well with the poems title.
there is lots and i mean lots going on in the poem and as individual lines i like what's going on, as a poem it feels a bit much
to get my head round without having to start again in order to get back on track.
i really like;

grinds against the whetstone of lustful danger.

i want to read the last word as dagger. i feel i have to read it as dagger, yet i know i must read it as danger. works, great line that works well with the last.

i'm not sure the format is doing you any favours.

thanks for the read.