12-14-2011, 09:54 PM
i have only said it a few times about a piece of writing; i loved it. narrated prose poetry or whatever it would be called, i think it's simply too good to alter. i suppose i could pick at it but for me that's all it would be, me picking at it for the sake of it.
i love the yellow jacketed man mentioned. it works really well with the picture.
the narration as a whole was a fantastical train of thought imagery. the repetition of the pond and the duck and anderson worked perfectly. the reader (me) gets the feeling that the payne whitney is more than just a reference point to give me a sense of the area or park. the french whores who came from who knows where strut through parts of the poem with ease. it all flows into itself and the into the reader.
i remember seeing the pigeon woman in that christmas film with kulkin and somehow she's also in this poem. sorry for the back pats, but it's one of the best poems i've read in a long time. thanks for the read.
i love the yellow jacketed man mentioned. it works really well with the picture.
the narration as a whole was a fantastical train of thought imagery. the repetition of the pond and the duck and anderson worked perfectly. the reader (me) gets the feeling that the payne whitney is more than just a reference point to give me a sense of the area or park. the french whores who came from who knows where strut through parts of the poem with ease. it all flows into itself and the into the reader.
i remember seeing the pigeon woman in that christmas film with kulkin and somehow she's also in this poem. sorry for the back pats, but it's one of the best poems i've read in a long time. thanks for the read.