It just is:

It just is:

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#16

12-13-2011, 08:58 PM

Hi billy If you're doing a re-write - I reckon

'to let a stained-glass window pray' is okay but we know it's glass, and stained-glass window is kinda ordinary but I think 'to let a stained window pray' could add an extra dimension (and the rhythm sounds better to me)....as the teens say - 'just saying'

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It just is: - by billy - 12-11-2011, 11:10 PM

RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-11-2011, 11:40 PM

RE: It just is: - by billy - 12-11-2011, 11:59 PM

RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-12-2011, 12:13 AM

RE: It just is: - by grannyjill - 12-12-2011, 12:26 AM

RE: It just is: - by Leanne - 12-12-2011, 05:20 AM

RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-12-2011, 09:50 AM

RE: It just is: - by billy - 12-13-2011, 08:35 PM

RE: It just is: - by Leanne - 12-12-2011, 09:55 AM

RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-12-2011, 10:05 AM

RE: It just is: - by grannyjill - 12-13-2011, 08:07 AM

RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-13-2011, 12:38 PM

RE: It just is: - by grannyjill - 12-13-2011, 05:33 PM

RE: It just is: - by Erthona - 12-13-2011, 07:14 PM

RE: It just is: - by billy - 12-13-2011, 08:55 PM

RE: It just is: - by grannyjill - 12-13-2011, 08:58 PM

RE: It just is: - by billy - 12-13-2011, 10:19 PM

RE: It just is: - by billy - 11-29-2014, 07:43 PM

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