12-13-2011, 08:35 PM
(12-12-2011, 09:50 AM)Erthona Wrote: in sonnet triolet or other poetic swill!first off, wow, i can't believe it got so much airplay; thanks for your rendition of prose post granny, it worked betterthan i expected.
villanelle also bother me, but that is because they are French, and as I think all French should be shortened...
You know you could just not shorten it.
in sonnet triolet or villanelle
still rhymes.
we gain the skill to wreak at will,
havoc with curly quill, or stick in sand
in sonnet triolet or villanelle
Dale
back to Dale;
yes, i should have seen that the whole ville would fit the bill.
will def take a lo of what's been said to heart when i do an edit.
thanks for the feedback.
