12-12-2011, 01:28 AM
For some of us, old top, this is a mite near the bone. What bone? The invisible one that the invisible dog buried in Act IV.
Doing my best to look at it critically, and failing really -- it's Christmas-tide-- the thing which stuck out was 'bland'. It isn't needed as an end-rhyme, but if you switched the words around eg 'be bland, or end with a bang' -- it would be spontaneous-sounding.
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Doing my best to look at it critically, and failing really -- it's Christmas-tide-- the thing which stuck out was 'bland'. It isn't needed as an end-rhyme, but if you switched the words around eg 'be bland, or end with a bang' -- it would be spontaneous-sounding.
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