hi erthona, (just in case i haven't already said hi 
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no constructive feedback on how it could be work-shopped. for me it's a done deal. a mixture of nonsense old age and a swipe at the venerable king that is far less than tragic. for some reason i get the feel that a dog is involved hehe.
a good original write that's pretty refreshing. welcome to the forum.
) no constructive feedback on how it could be work-shopped. for me it's a done deal. a mixture of nonsense old age and a swipe at the venerable king that is far less than tragic. for some reason i get the feel that a dog is involved hehe.
a good original write that's pretty refreshing. welcome to the forum.