Holidaying in Borth

[addy]

I love the picture you painted! So affecting, even down to the almost-tacky details (I loved "Blinking neon fish and chip restaurants; with scribbled menus taped to their doors") that really bring the somber simplicity to life. You've got the mood down pat. There's lots of images, too, so I didn't feel it was too telly.

I could only suggest that in L3 of the first verse, you get rid of "huge" since its pretty much redundant. Just a minor critique, though