Considering Suicide

[Wildcard]

If your poem started with 'higgledly piggedly houses' and I hadn't heard of it I'd Google it and if I didn't get it then, I'd ask you what you meant. If what you meant makes sense then I'd probably digress, if it didn't I'd say so. I would respect your rights as creator and maintain my positions as critique. As I said, I gave the suggestions some thought, but I just can't justify using it. Not entirely because it isn't an American word either. Mostly it just doesn't give that sarcastic slant that I'd like to infuse.

Seriously thanks for the ideas. I don't mean to sound stubborn.