Eight Movements

[Wildcard]

My background interferes with my ability to understand those who think outside the box. (in other words - I'm a dumbo!)

What she said.

I read Todd's critique and I still don't know what the hell is going on. Like Jill said, it contains a great many beautiful phrase like

Sunlight set ablaze
Burning with clichés

and

'with their Strawberry Shortcake imaginations'

I love reading your poetry and long for the day that I might actually read one of the more in depth poems and get it the first time without Googling or waiting on Todd :p