11-30-2011, 07:04 AM
hello! sorry it has taken some time to make my rounds...
addy- appreicate your feedback and am happy you enjoyed! I may switch the tense of "open" in the first stanza to give it more strength. always wonderful to hear such positive things (oh, and I addressed the comma).
IC-thanks to you as well! I agreed with your trimmings, put them into practice. always valuable feedback!
granny- certainly not a critique I can complain about! everything you said is appreciated, thanks for your time.
addy- appreicate your feedback and am happy you enjoyed! I may switch the tense of "open" in the first stanza to give it more strength. always wonderful to hear such positive things (oh, and I addressed the comma).
IC-thanks to you as well! I agreed with your trimmings, put them into practice. always valuable feedback!
granny- certainly not a critique I can complain about! everything you said is appreciated, thanks for your time.
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