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[grannyjill]

I've had a quick read of this thread (top to bottom)........I liked all the changes except for the loss of the first verse....I read the completed poem in total bewilderment (especially as I suffer with an amnesiac handicap of never managing to read and remember a poem's title)


I thought it was about a spider under the stairs at the beginnng and then lost the plot entirely as the poem developed.

I know...I'm stupid. But, I am your reading public and sometimes we need a little more not a little less.