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We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree)
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11-27-2011, 05:41 AM
How about "the trip for him was ended" or some such in L10? All things considered, I think this is a fine use of the form (and I'm pleased to see that, contrary to the "rules", you've managed to sneak in a few light rhymes). I very much like the eloquent simplicity of "too late now for Earl Grey and sympathy", that line alone speaks volumes.
It could be worse
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We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by grannyjill - 11-22-2011, 03:55 PM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by addy - 11-22-2011, 09:32 PM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by grannyjill - 11-22-2011, 10:29 PM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by addy - 11-23-2011, 05:11 PM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by billy - 11-25-2011, 12:10 AM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by Leanne - 11-27-2011, 05:41 AM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by grannyjill - 11-27-2011, 04:09 PM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by Touchstone - 11-27-2011, 05:19 PM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by grannyjill - 11-27-2011, 06:19 PM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by Touchstone - 11-27-2011, 07:33 PM
RE: We Were Strangers? (Double Etheree) - by grannyjill - 11-27-2011, 10:47 PM
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