Hope

Hope

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11-23-2011, 05:26 PM

@ grannyjil: Really appreciate the feedback. It helps to know what works and what doesn't.

@ todd: Your suggestions for line two and three make lots of sense. You and grannyjill seem to be in consensus re: the last lines so looks like I have to work on that as well. Thanks!

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Hope - by digna_sofia - 11-21-2011, 10:43 AM

RE: Hope - by Wildcard - 11-22-2011, 12:26 AM

RE: Hope - by digna_sofia - 11-22-2011, 09:26 PM

RE: Hope - by grannyjill - 11-22-2011, 11:14 PM

RE: Hope - by Todd - 11-23-2011, 08:38 AM

RE: Hope - by digna_sofia - 11-23-2011, 05:26 PM

RE: Hope - by grannyjill - 11-23-2011, 06:33 PM

RE: Hope - by Philatone - 11-28-2011, 02:28 PM

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