11-18-2011, 04:35 PM
I'm with Mark on this.....I reckon you made the last bit up just to disgust us.
The first 80% was a great piece of writing.
In my early poetry-writing days I would attempt to write a serious poem...but then would put a comic punch-line on the end (because, I suppose, I didn't want people to pour scorn on my writing and so I pipped them at the post, so to speak)...is this what you are doing?
The first 80% was a great piece of writing.
In my early poetry-writing days I would attempt to write a serious poem...but then would put a comic punch-line on the end (because, I suppose, I didn't want people to pour scorn on my writing and so I pipped them at the post, so to speak)...is this what you are doing?