exposed

[Leanne]

I like the great wordplay going on in there... as was already said, there are twists where the poem dances away from where you'd assumed it to go. So though the title is "exposed", it's very interesting that there are lots of tricks and mirroring going on. It's a very tight, rich poem that stands up well (and gets even better) upon re-reading.

Addy, so sorry to have ignored you! I very much appreciate your comment, I just forgot to say so ><