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[Leanne]

Cloth-caught, her moonlight echoes ..might need more readings, but got caught on "moonlight". keep wanting to say the adjective form "moonlit". Could be the poem didn't go where I expected, now i'm trying to figure out this "she" again

Many thanks I tend to think of it as "her moonlight" which "echoes", although I can read it as "her echoes" by "moonlight"... but if I changed it to "moonlit" then I'd only get the adjective out of it and I kind of like ambiguity. Because I'm not sane.

I guess this is an example of how a little bit of a change in grammar can make a difference.