Fire
#10
altering the the stanza with "December" to try and address that issue with the pole

and thanks mark! i'm always down for feedback like that! much appreciated
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Fire - by Philatone - 11-07-2011, 10:51 AM
RE: Fire - by grannyjill - 11-12-2011, 09:33 PM
RE: Fire - by Leanne - 11-13-2011, 08:26 AM
RE: Fire - by billy - 11-14-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: Fire - by addy - 11-14-2011, 01:03 PM
RE: Fire - by Philatone - 11-14-2011, 02:38 PM
RE: Fire - by billy - 11-14-2011, 08:11 PM
RE: Fire - by Leanne - 11-15-2011, 04:36 AM
RE: Fire - by Wildcard - 11-15-2011, 08:51 AM
RE: Fire - by Philatone - 11-15-2011, 02:00 PM



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