exposed

[Philatone]

I, naked before glass; she ..great divisions with syntax and punctuation
unfolds her shadows...wonderful image!
Cloth-caught, her moonlight echoes ..might need more readings, but got caught on "moonlight". keep wanting to say the adjective form "moonlit". Could be the poem didn't go where I expected, now i'm trying to figure out this "she" again
pull, tide-twisting. I am drawn...like the tide, natural with the moon and extending it to the speaker
Razor tongue slices, drip..wow...there is quite a dramatic shift in word choice and tone. i'm debating if a space between this line and the previous would enhance the effect/ reiterate the "slicing"
lick, groan and touch of
flesh, breathe.
I am she is me and we
are burning.

..really enjoyed the closing two lines

a short piece with the punches where they need to be, especially at the masterly-woven end.the moonlight and echoes section did trip me up a little bit because of the flexibility of boths words (nouns and verbs and adjectives). of course, that could also go well with that image of the glass, reflections and the like that seem to be coursing through the piece. regardless, I enjoyed the read,leanne