11-15-2011, 08:57 AM
In the interest of giving my honest opinion I will tell you that I loved the first 80% of you poem. I started reading it and each line made me start over until by the time I got to the disgusting part I'd read it several times through. Then you turned my stomach and I felt cheated of my beautiful quasi-spiritual ending 
I think it's a great poem, but individual taste keeps me from truly appreciating it. Thanks for sharing and I hope I have not offended you.
I think it's a great poem, but individual taste keeps me from truly appreciating it. Thanks for sharing and I hope I have not offended you.