11-14-2011, 02:38 PM
hello all! thanks for the comments. specifically
-granny j: I didn't intend it to be too much of a burden of a riddle, though I realize the title is key. you've given me a new topic to explore in riddle poems!
-leanne: appreciated the comments on the chicken...and everything else for that matter! letting me know about the tone shifts was very helpful, can never take for granted others feel what you desire them to. certainly more than helpful!
billy- you drew my attention to the ring actually, hadn't noticed it, I guess because the images felt so separate for me. glad the duplicates don't detract. not sure about England, but a lot of times, people put "Lost" posters and the like on poles to find things/ spread news in neighborhoods. if it is not clear enough, am certainly open to adjusting
addy- thank you so much for everything said! initially, I thought you wanted me to add an actual dash to the first line, but i think I have a better understanding now. Certainly will also take a peek at those two stanzas in particular, scissors in hand if needed
-granny j: I didn't intend it to be too much of a burden of a riddle, though I realize the title is key. you've given me a new topic to explore in riddle poems!
-leanne: appreciated the comments on the chicken...and everything else for that matter! letting me know about the tone shifts was very helpful, can never take for granted others feel what you desire them to. certainly more than helpful!
billy- you drew my attention to the ring actually, hadn't noticed it, I guess because the images felt so separate for me. glad the duplicates don't detract. not sure about England, but a lot of times, people put "Lost" posters and the like on poles to find things/ spread news in neighborhoods. if it is not clear enough, am certainly open to adjusting
addy- thank you so much for everything said! initially, I thought you wanted me to add an actual dash to the first line, but i think I have a better understanding now. Certainly will also take a peek at those two stanzas in particular, scissors in hand if needed
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