Once In a While Meltdown

[billy]

unclear offense
as if it mattered
a nervous predator
mortifies a stoic little bunny
then loses her mind into the bedroom
behind the oak
and dull brass hinges
a tiny plea melts
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant throbs
back against the door
weeping for mother
and me

good 1st three lines. then i got a bit waylaid as to who was what etc.
then from L6 it gets back into gear.
love the ignorant throbs, i suffered those on many occasions from my two when they were young the absence of grammar is working well.

i agree with granny jill, you heartless man