The Perfect Sonnet
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Now I want a chocolate fireguard Smile

I'm not at all bothered by lack of comments though, in the "for fun" section I'm happy that people read. Of course I'm doubly happy when people read AND say something in return!

And yep, I'd place the volta at that line also -- now I need to clear off, I seem to have acquired a whole bunch of ticks.
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The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 11-09-2011, 06:39 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by grannyjill - 11-13-2011, 01:33 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 11-13-2011, 06:16 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by grannyjill - 11-13-2011, 07:13 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 05:23 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Brownlie - 05-10-2014, 06:07 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 06:14 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Brownlie - 05-10-2014, 06:34 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by abu nuwas - 05-10-2014, 06:41 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Erthona - 05-10-2014, 07:39 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 06:48 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by abu nuwas - 05-10-2014, 07:45 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 07:45 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 07:48 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Brownlie - 05-10-2014, 07:59 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by abu nuwas - 05-10-2014, 08:00 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 08:03 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by billy - 05-10-2014, 08:07 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by billy - 05-10-2014, 09:04 AM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Erthona - 05-10-2014, 01:45 PM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 02:44 PM
RE: The Perfect Sonnet - by billy - 05-10-2014, 04:18 PM



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