11-13-2011, 01:33 AM
Why has no one responded to your perfect sonnet? Since I am a rank amateur in regard to sonnets any response I might make will be as much use as .....look out, here comes a cliche....a chocolate fireguard.
iambic pentameter lines - tick
abab cdcd efef gg - Shakespearean - tick
14 lines - tick
three quatrains, and a final rhyming couplet - tick
.....not sure of that volta thingy this looks as if there is a turn beginning O! Love enduring, why should you be changed? - so - tick
so, it looks like a Perfect Sonnet to me.
iambic pentameter lines - tick
abab cdcd efef gg - Shakespearean - tick
14 lines - tick
three quatrains, and a final rhyming couplet - tick
.....not sure of that volta thingy this looks as if there is a turn beginning O! Love enduring, why should you be changed? - so - tick
so, it looks like a Perfect Sonnet to me.