11-11-2011, 08:09 AM
I love "cloistered like a sorrowing ghost", what a wonderful image!
S2 L4 would actually work better without the inverted syntax, as "to keep a tryst with Locksley's Lord".
Great narrative, grannyjill -- I'd probably like to see a stanza stuck in between the second and third ones now, about their true and magnificent love etc to build it up a bit, all the better to crash it down with dying Robin
S2 L4 would actually work better without the inverted syntax, as "to keep a tryst with Locksley's Lord".
Great narrative, grannyjill -- I'd probably like to see a stanza stuck in between the second and third ones now, about their true and magnificent love etc to build it up a bit, all the better to crash it down with dying Robin
It could be worse