Robin and Marion (A Narrative Poem)
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i think inversion good at times. i'd call this a period piece so it wasn't a problem for me.
even an odd cliche that slips through isn't a problem. the narrative is good and incorporates some good images.
i enjoyed it. though it's a love story i found it to be a light one. (yes, yes, i know they died hehe)

thanks for the read grannyjill.
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RE: Robin and Marion (A Narrative Poem) - by billy - 11-11-2011, 06:01 AM



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