11-09-2011, 05:57 AM
Into the bedroom
and out of her mind,
she left the bunny mortified
but stoic (as if it mattered.)
A paranoid predator
stalking her, pray
as she might.
Behind solid oak
and dull brass hinges,
a tiny plea melts
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant percussion.
She is back against the door
weeping for mother
and me.
and out of her mind,
she left the bunny mortified
but stoic (as if it mattered.)
A paranoid predator
stalking her, pray
as she might.
Behind solid oak
and dull brass hinges,
a tiny plea melts
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant percussion.
She is back against the door
weeping for mother
and me.
Quote:Rev 2
It was an unclear offense,
as if that mattered right now
to the mortified little bunny
watching a nervous predator
lose her mind down the hallway,
into the distant bedroom.
Behind the dark oak
and dulled brass hinges
a tiny plea melts
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant throbs.
My back against the door,
I weep for mother
and me.
Quote:Rev. 1:
unclear offense
as if it mattered now
the mortified little bunny watched
a nervous predator
lose her mind into the bedroom
behind the dark oak
and dulled brass hinges
a tiny plea melted
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant throbs
my back against the door
weeping for mother
and me
Mark Wrote:Original:
unclear offense
as if it mattered
a nervous predator
mortifies a stoic little bunny
then loses her mind into the bedroom
behind the oak
and dull brass hinges
a tiny plea melts
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant throbs
back against the door
weeping for mother
and me

