Once In a While Meltdown

[Wildcard]

Into the bedroom
and out of her mind,
she left the bunny mortified
but stoic (as if it mattered.)

A paranoid predator
stalking her, pray
as she might.

Behind solid oak
and dull brass hinges,
a tiny plea melts
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant percussion.

She is back against the door
weeping for mother
and me.

Rev 2

It was an unclear offense,
as if that mattered right now
to the mortified little bunny
watching a nervous predator
lose her mind down the hallway,
into the distant bedroom.
Behind the dark oak
and dulled brass hinges
a tiny plea melts
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant throbs.

My back against the door,
I weep for mother
and me.

Rev. 1:

unclear offense
as if it mattered now
the mortified little bunny watched
a nervous predator
lose her mind into the bedroom
behind the dark oak
and dulled brass hinges
a tiny plea melted
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant throbs
my back against the door
weeping for mother
and me

Original:

unclear offense
as if it mattered
a nervous predator
mortifies a stoic little bunny
then loses her mind into the bedroom
behind the oak
and dull brass hinges
a tiny plea melts
to a wracking soundtrack
of ignorant throbs
back against the door
weeping for mother
and me