11-06-2011, 08:13 PM
Thanks everyone-
Billy, definitely needs some tidying up with grammar and punctuation- when I wrote this I was in an experimaental learning curve
Thanks Philatone, yes- I see what you mean- with the benifit of distance I see that it is almost two poems, but needs some kind of link between the first and second stanzas, and moredifferent line breaks.
Thanks, Heslopian- if you get chance, the art and life of Aubrey Beardsley is very interesting... I though he was just a children's illustrator before I read the book, although I did know about the erotica because I used to work in an archive which housed some of his prints.
Billy- also- it is specific to Aubrey Beardsley, but generally to the fin de siecle artists and poets. I find them fascinating both their work and lives
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aubrey_Beardsley
Billy, definitely needs some tidying up with grammar and punctuation- when I wrote this I was in an experimaental learning curve
Thanks Philatone, yes- I see what you mean- with the benifit of distance I see that it is almost two poems, but needs some kind of link between the first and second stanzas, and moredifferent line breaks.
Thanks, Heslopian- if you get chance, the art and life of Aubrey Beardsley is very interesting... I though he was just a children's illustrator before I read the book, although I did know about the erotica because I used to work in an archive which housed some of his prints.
Billy- also- it is specific to Aubrey Beardsley, but generally to the fin de siecle artists and poets. I find them fascinating both their work and lives
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aubrey_Beardsley

