Liked this one, I enjoyed how it was a good combination of whimsical observation and narrative ( the red leaf being attributed to a mischievous tree was an endearing touch). I thought the first couplet was the least effective for some reason... perhaps billy is right and you need a bit more fun / drama in line2. Otherwise, I thought it was a delightful piece 
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?