11-01-2011, 04:53 PM
Don't consider this poem a failure Jill. It really is quite good. Edits can be a frustrating exercise sometimes (or even a lot of the time) but I hope you don't let that put you off too much. Just breathe and come back to it whenever you feel like. 
Once you see it again with fresh eyes I hope you'll feel much better about it, and be able to make an edit you like. Of course it's up to you to abandon the piece if that's what you think is best; just wanted to make it perfectly clear that it's far from rubbish and you've done quite well with it, imo
Once you see it again with fresh eyes I hope you'll feel much better about it, and be able to make an edit you like. Of course it's up to you to abandon the piece if that's what you think is best; just wanted to make it perfectly clear that it's far from rubbish and you've done quite well with it, imo
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?