11-01-2011, 04:25 PM
no need for that jill.
advise will often be conflictint.
remember when you said "i want such and such to stay, i don't want ti minimise the poem" well that's you're own voice.
for me the original was your own voice. i just got the feel that the edit wasn't your own voice.
as for what you know. i've seen your poems and you know enough to say "no, i won't change that part"
i like the original better. and the original is still there.
i know what you mean though. it's so easy to distort the original idea that becomes another idea. i used to do it so often myself when i got feedback.
i'm so sorry for that last post granny. maybe i went a little too far, saying what i did.
advise will often be conflictint.
remember when you said "i want such and such to stay, i don't want ti minimise the poem" well that's you're own voice.
for me the original was your own voice. i just got the feel that the edit wasn't your own voice.
as for what you know. i've seen your poems and you know enough to say "no, i won't change that part"
i like the original better. and the original is still there.
i know what you mean though. it's so easy to distort the original idea that becomes another idea. i used to do it so often myself when i got feedback.
i'm so sorry for that last post granny. maybe i went a little too far, saying what i did.